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Writer’s Block


It’s crushing
when real-life trauma
crashes into the middle
of writing a beautiful story.

The make-believe world is shelved.
days pass—
 months.

The heart
cannot tell the hand
to write beautifully
when it’s just trying
to keep pumping.

Maybe the stories
will breathe again
once air returns to the lungs—
when breath becomes possible.
When the fog lifts
from the damage,
from the darkness.

When the eyes
begin to see color again,
after so long
of only black and white.

When the voice in the head whispers:
You are okay.
The trauma happened to you—
but it is not you.

A tiny flicker of fire,
a smoldering ember,
waits in silence,
day after day—
months, a year.

Hoping the writer
will seek even a glimmer
in the deep dark
that swallowed the soul.

No one saw the time it stole—
that deep,
aching emptiness.

Sometimes,
devastation
is a place you don’t come back from.

The story once poured
onto pages—
no one will feel
what the writer once held.

Love,
laughter,
tucked gently
in a single smoldering flame,
lost in a universe of black.


The story
now buried deep
within the writer’s chest.

The writer stopped writing.
The characters died.
The story died
within the writer.

The story died.

The writer-

The ember.

About this poem

Her poetry is rooted in lived experience, particularly navigating the intersections of loss, healing, and creativity. Her work often centers on the emotional spaces between what is felt and what is spoken, using poetry to hold both vulnerability and hope. “Writer's Block” is a deeply personal piece about the pause of life. The silence trauma imposes and the quiet ember that endures beneath it. This is her first submission to a literary journal, and she hopes it resonates with others who have lost and are still finding their voice.  

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Written on April 04, 2025

Submitted by Nissee2 on May 26, 2025

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Denise Long

I was born in California and raised on a farm in South Dakota. Now 63, my writing reflects a life richly lived and lost, offering a realistic view while also imagining what can be. I have a passion for family, friends, music, beach walks, and fantasy football—a life of simplicity in the complexity of now. more…

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49 Comments
  • donka_k
    Beautifully written with depth, and understnding of the emotiomnal complexity the human heart. Great images.
    LikeReply1 day ago
  • melodyd.03294
    Wow I can truly relate to this poem! I love the line about trauma happening to you and that it's not who you are. I am trying to heal past trauma and that really helped!
    LikeReply3 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Dear Denise, and others, consider this: This very poem, when reversed in order, with the ending becoming the beginning; and now having 12 stanzas, with the original first three stanzas deleted — hence, a newer shorter poem — produces now a poem with a much more positive message. You might want to consider calling it “Writer’s Block Sparkling Embers.” A mere thought and, voila, a new poem! 
    LikeReply5 days ago
  • brijmohan_p
    Wow, this is all the way an exceptional poem, very great, truly great, written for all moods, after the comment I will go through this again as this has happened with me too, some lines come into the needful mind but due to the distrub the lines are flown away, otherwise it could have been a good catch. Thanks for such writing. 
    LikeReply 16 days ago
  • blanchardcynthiablanchard
    Beautifully written striking images powerful talented
    LikeReply6 days ago
  • ranimathew09
    Good
    LikeReply9 days ago
  • patsileanne
    Nicely done. The title grabbed me as I have suffered LITERAL writers block and was curious what the poem would be to me… reading it brought me on a bit of a journey into how often LIFE is the cause of the writers block…. And how sometimes I need to see a lesson or learn something from the experience in order to be able to write about it effectively. 
    LikeReply 111 days ago
  • CLOrso
    Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it.
    LikeReply12 days ago
  • jos.07252
    I give this 5 stars to they aren't working... ouch and yet so refreshing. How many of us turning pain into hope, and chaos into joy, fragmented by experience and through our voice making ourselves whole agien!!!! 
    LikeReply 116 days ago
  • Charles2
    i feel deep emotion. unimaginable pain/sorrow. very well translated through your words
    LikeReply16 days ago
  • Kshetrapal
    So long for life

    A good thought, good poem
    LikeReply16 days ago
  • ward.rm
    A sad and heartfelt poem that stays with and within us.
    LikeReply17 days ago
  • otteri_s
    Good
    LikeReply18 days ago
  • donka_k
    Grips from the very start and builds up masterfully. A wonderful work
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • baby_p
    Sometimes,
    devastation
    is a place you don’t come back from.

    Very true indeed.
    LikeReply4 months ago
  • BellaTheMilkCarton
    this is beautiful a new read and its lovely! I like this piece!
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • devonb.04801
    I loved this! Every poet or writer knows that feeling! Like the blackness in you're soul until another page you unfold! Please keep writing! I will as well!
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • Htrout24
    Nice writing
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • artistdiplomdesignrenivbifamo
    You Like go, go , that ist your way, regards Reni
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • Tammihanley0
    Lovely poem you are a great artist
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • ward.rm
    A poignant glimpse inside a writer's mind-how delicate the creative process is, especially when confronted by loss and grief.
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • amandak
    Beautiful
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • sarahMG505
    What a wonderful piece
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    Absolutely beautiful piece of real life experiences of every writer.
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • Demon_night
    that's how I kinda feel when I cant write
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • ChasmOfPoetry
    wow. very unique perspective...
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • Kshetrapal
    Very good poem .
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • jimsp1129
    Beautifully written and constructed. The poem flows wonderfully until there are no more words. Well done.
    LikeReply 15 months ago
    • Nissee2
      thank you
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • Pookietoo
    Beautifully expressed
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • Htrout24
    Nicely written
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • AIDA
    What a beautifully evocative poem you've created! Your exploration of the theme of writer's block through the lens of trauma is both poignant and relatable. You effectively capture the struggle between the desire to create and the heavy burden of emotional experiences that can stifle creativity. The imagery you use—such as "the fog lifts from the damage" and "a smoldering ember"—paints a vivid picture of the conflict within the writer, making it easy for readers to connect with the feelings you're expressing.

    Your shifts in tone—from despair to a glimmer of hope—create a powerful emotional journey. The abstract concepts of creativity, trauma, and recovery are woven together seamlessly, allowing for a rich exploration of the theme. The repetition of phrases like "the story died" emphasizes the depth of the loss, while also invoking a sense of urgency for revival.

    1. Pacing and Structure:
    Consider varying your line lengths to enhance the rhythm of the poem. Introducing shorter lines in places could create a more impactful pause, allowing readers to absorb the weight of certain phrases.

    2. Imagery Expansion:
    While the imagery is compelling, you might explore adding more sensory details to evoke physical sensations associated with trauma and creation. What does it feel like to be in that writer’s block? Perhaps touching on sound, smell, or touch could deepen the reader's immersion.

    3. Conclusion Impact:
    The concluding lines can be a powerful space to either leave the reader with a sense of hope or a haunting reminder of the struggle. You might consider a more definitive or transformative closing thought to signify the evolution of the writer's journey from despair to rekindling creativity.

    Overall, your poem is a heartfelt reflection on a universal struggle faced by many writers. It resonates deeply with those who have experienced similar feelings, and I encourage you to continue exploring this theme further! Keep writing, and let that ember grow into a flame!
     
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • sharona.reeves81
    very relatable
    LikeReply 15 months ago
    • Nissee2
      thank you
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • aasthashekhar557
    Well written
    LikeReply 15 months ago
    • Nissee2
      thank you
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • laken_Riley
    This was beautiful thank four sharing
    LikeReply 25 months ago
    • Nissee2
      thank you :)
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • Htrout24
    Nicely written
    LikeReply 25 months ago
  • Benny11
    When the fog lifts hopefully you will write beautiful stories again. The characters will not die. Nice piece, Well done
    LikeReply 35 months ago
    • Nissee2
      The thought of my characters dying was the reason I kept going.
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • buhlezinina_l
    An amusement
    LikeReply 25 months ago
  • Giselavigil
    You masterfully captured what all writers go through. Enjoyed reading this. Nicely done!
    LikeReply 35 months ago
  • caelan_k
    How I have related to this story. Many of times pen touches paper and I have nothing. The stanza:
    "Love,
    laughter,
    tucked gently
    in a single smoldering flame,
    lost in a universe of black" is exactly what is felt, and is captured so well in these 5 lines with "Love," and "laughter," split into different lines. 
    LikeReply 25 months ago
  • NightWisp
    Most of us have been there. But one day, the sun will break through.
    LikeReply 26 months ago
  • LunacyEnigma
    Great title for this poem. I like how you had a progression of the result of the block; it feels like being paralyzed inside. I love your writing.
    LikeReply 26 months ago
    • Nissee2
      thank you, it means a lot
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • Kahlani
    The lines, "The trauma happened to you - but it is not you," struck a chord with me. I think your writer's block has finally lifted its veil. Beautiful.
    LikeReply 26 months ago
    • Nissee2
      thank you, it is a real struggle
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • SoJames
    Nicely said!
    LikeReply 26 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    What a depiction of Writer’s Block. Presented here are painful traumatic imageries of the writer’s crushing torture over time, starting with aching sensations in the chest, suffocating the lungs, disrupting breathing, blocking the eyes from light and color, and the hands from motion, and replacing all with emptiness and loneliness; the writer’s love and laughter once filling the air with such light, such brightness to bleed the pages with colorful tales, now replaced by the embers of what once was, and yet seeks to be reborn. 
    LikeReply 26 months ago
  • babbina
    I felt like the writer conveyed in the BEST way what Writer's Block is how the challenges of life is the constant backdrop and theme of this. I felt like they wrote and captured EXACTLY what I and I'm sure many others have experienced over the decades of their lives. 
    LikeReply 26 months ago
  • ivanz
    Interesting
    LikeReply 26 months ago
  • frostallie
    Oooh this one hit me hard, and I knew it would right from the title. Beauty in simplicity, and so much told in a succinct manner. I felt it from the first line to the last. I think anyone who has felt writer's block in any capacity will resonate with this. Really lovely. 
    LikeReply 26 months ago
  • jonsaviours
    It was really hard to pick, but I understand the message you were conveying. So you have my vote.
    LikeReply 16 months ago
  • KristophMac
    Relatable and painful. Fighting through a block to lay some heartfelt words to the page is sometimes the biggest challenge as an artist. Well written and expressed.
    LikeReply 26 months ago

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