In the sepia-drenched room, their eyes met, a width of desire stretched between them. A blithe smile masked hidden secrets, ensnaring them in a mystery where responsibility and passion radiated in every touch.
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David (ben Alexander) Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
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Quite a challenge to use such diverse prompt words in such a short paragraph, David! The result is magical. Genius at work! ๐
๐ค๐๐ป Cheryl ๐๐ป๐ค ~ you are so kind; thank you
Always my pleasure, David! โค
ohhh la la Davidโค๏ธ
โค๏ธ ๐ Cindy ๐ โค๏ธ
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A gentle telling of an intimate storyโฆ.
๐๐๐ป Muri ๐๐ป๐
Ooh la la David ๐
I am eagerly waiting the next paragraph!
Nicely done ๐
๐ค๐๐ป Maggie ๐๐ป๐ค ~ thank you
A well written paragraph.
๐ค๐๐ป Robbie ๐๐ป๐ค ~ thanks!!
Besides the width of desire
It is the
Responsibility and Passion
That stalked the room
For me.
๐๐๐ป Abi ๐๐ป๐ ~ I’m glad you picked up on that
You welcome Poet
In my mind without them
They cannot be distinguished as a classic romantic mystery
It would be essentially ordinary
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This is filled with mature love, deep love and so incredibly touching to my heart David. Thank you!
๐๐๐ป Joni ๐๐ป๐ ~ I’m so glad; thanks!
Now that you have us all lining up for cold showers…
๐ ๐ Annette ๐ ๐