Okay, so the person who asked is probly satisfied with an answer like that, but will your readers accept that kind of an answer from your stories main character? I think not. They want to know everything they can about their hero, they want to know what he knows, feel what he feels, cry when he cries, laugh when he laughs, they want to be a part of the story, they want to know what it feels like to be this person. To accomplish that you will need alot more than a simple…”I’m feeling fine”.

Pick a character, one of your own, a fan fic one, or even you, this need not be fiction, non-fiction is fine. Take your character, and describe how he/she is feeling right now, right this very instant.

Think about what is going through his mind right now.
Why does he feel this emotion?
What has happened to cause it?
How does this emotion feel mentally?
How does it feel physically?
Does it effect the way he sees, feels, and hears things in the room around him?
Do the colors in the room make him feel happier or depressed?
What time of day is it? What time of year? How do these factors affect his mood?

See if you can fill up more than one page, doing nothing but describing this emtional state of mind in which your character now finds himself in.

Okay, so the person who asked is probly satisfied with an answer like that, but will your readers accept that kind of an answer from your stories main character? I think not. They want to know everything they can about their hero, they want to know what he knows, feel what he feels, cry when he cries, laugh when he laughs, they want to be a part of the story, they want to know what it feels like to be this person. To accomplish that you will need alot more than a simple…”I’m feeling fine”.

Pick a character, one of your own, a fan fic one, or even you, this need not be fiction, non-fiction is fine. Take your character, and describe how he/she is feeling right now, right this very instant.

Think about what is going through his mind right now.
Why does he feel this emotion?
What has happened to cause it?
How does this emotion feel mentally?
How does it feel physically?
Does it effect the way he sees, feels, and hears things in the room around him?
Do the colors in the room make him feel happier or depressed?
What time of day is it? What time of year? How do these factors affect his mood?

See if you can fill up more than one page, doing nothing but describing this emtional state of mind in which your character now finds himself in.

Okay, so the person who asked is probly satisfied with an answer like that, but will your readers accept that kind of an answer from your stories main character? I think not. They want to know everything they can about their hero, they want to know what he knows, feel what he feels, cry when he cries, laugh when he laughs, they want to be a part of the story, they want to know what it feels like to be this person. To accomplish that you will need alot more than a simple…”I’m feeling fine”.

Pick a character, one of your own, a fan fic one, or even you, this need not be fiction, non-fiction is fine. Take your character, and describe how he/she is feeling right now, right this very instant.

Think about what is going through his mind right now.
Why does he feel this emotion?
What has happened to cause it?
How does this emotion feel mentally?
How does it feel physically?
Does it effect the way he sees, feels, and hears things in the room around him?
Do the colors in the room make him feel happier or depressed?
What time of day is it? What time of year? How do these factors affect his mood?

See if you can fill up more than one page, doing nothing but describing this emtional state of mind in which your character now finds himself in.