Elite Commando’s
Book 1
Chapter 1- About us
(Take this! And that!) Oh, sorry I was training. The names Flash, you wanna know why? Ok, let me explain (It won’t take too long). My master taught me sword fighting, and now I’m faster at it than him! My weapon is a staff, but at the top it’s a double bladed ax. I wear a green cloak for no reason, it’s just me.
(Fine I’ll explain us, I know what to do!) Sorry about that, Bot gets a little worried that someones gonna get us every second. Bot is my little robot friend. I made him a long time ago, probably 20-30 years. He also uses a staff, but it’s a power staff. Than our master, Ax Man, the reason we call him that is because he’s an ax. He is the most skilled person(ax in this case) I’ve ever met. Then it’s Green Mayhem, he bought the Green Lanterns suit on eBay and now he says that he has the Green Lanterns power(which he doesn’t). And last but not least is Flare, he can throw fire with his hands! I wish I knew how to do that!

(Ok give me the pen and I won’t have to…) Whoops, I forgot we aren’t using pens, we’re using a mic. I’m Grudge, I have fire hair and eyes. I love weapons/machines, I use a staff to blast my enemies away! Fear me! Some of the other people who are against Elite Commandos are, Doctor Smith and Venom. Smith doesn’t really do anything but walk Venom around. Venom is a little guy, but he’s a powerhouse. He can destroy a building in seconds. Then there’s Rocky, you don’t know why we call him that? Well he’s made out of rock. Very hard to defeat, even if you are the Elite Commandos. Last but not least is Death, we don’t know if he IS death, because he’s just a black cape. This story is the first and last time we all worked together. I’ll let Flash say this part since it talks about the EC.
Ok, it all started when we were “discussing” about our enemy’s….
“When are they coming back?” Flare asked.
“I don’t know and I don’t care, I want to be prepared. Come on and get up! I didn’t make you a member to sit down all day.” Ax man replied.
“Its midnight! I’m sooo v-very tired” Flare yawned.
Well, I was standing up ready to go, but everyone else was sleeping. Only one way to wake them up. I grabbed the extra gun I kept in my pocket. BOOM! They woke up.
“Now, it’s time to train.” And we went into the training room.
Chapter 2- The 14th
August 14th– Regular day for normal people, well, I’m not normal. Hey, I’m what you guys say ‘Duk’. I formed the Elite Commando’s at age 11 which was 3 years ago now. Yes, it’s my birthday, sadly.
“Happy birthday!” said my family, coming in unexpectedly.
“I’m making my story!” I said, rolling my eyes.
“Whoops! Sorry!” And they walked out.
Now back to the story….
I was watching the monitors for the bad guys like I always do, so I can warn the EC. Only Axe Man has seen me in real life, so then my cover isn’t blown. Today it changes…..
I saw that the bad guys came out early, TOO early. This shocked me, it could only mean one thing…
I grabbed the phone and dialed the guy who fly’s my jet.
“Pilot! Ready my plane, I’m going to see the Elites.”
“Yes, sir! We will be waiting for you!”
And when I got there, everything was ready to go. We took off, and then it happened. Most of the times, I would be worry free, not after this trip.
First, I don’t know how, but I saw something coming. Luckily I made this jet myself, and I made some self defense weapons.
“Unidentified object heading straight towards us, should it be shot down?” Said a computer voice coming from weapons control.
I grabbed my binoculars and looked. It was a evilish flying creature. It had the evil mark on its wings.
“Shoot it down!” I yelled.
Then the plane started shaking from the gun shooting at it. It easily missed it because the creature saw it coming. Then it started coming towards us FASTER. This wasn’t good.
“Try the missiles!”
It launched three missiles, which will be hard to avoid. It saw them coming and went down into a dive, straight toward the sea. I told the pilot to go as fast as he can. We were near two hundred mph now. We landed and I got off, I told the pilot to go re-fill the jet so we can have enough for the way back. He left, and when he got about fifty feet in the air, the creature came and took off a wing. The jet went down, down, down. KA-BOOM! It was gone. Then I saw the creature coming back around, for me….
Chapter 3- It gets worse
Coming soon














































Awesome Story Dukster!
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Saweet! I’m lovin’ it, awesome story..!