Do you want to fold this along with the detail attribute in the earlier paragraph? I guess they all fall into the same bucket.
Also beside this paragraph there is no other change in other lines except indentation and extra spaces. Right? if you remove those that might be easier to catch the actual changes and review them.

• The problem is that (unlike detail and composed) these two attributes are not spec-ed or even described clearly anywhere. I think a normative text won't make sense. I moved the Note up, right after the para on other attributes.
  Does it look reasonable now?

• Yikes, I only looked at a local diff tool so didn't realize that whitespace changes are not visible here. Sorry.