Merge pull request #292 from w3c/abstract

wareid · web-flow · commit 87fbff82ba08 · 2023-05-23T10:27:20.000-04:00
Editing the Abstract
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
@@ -47,7 +47,6 @@
   </head>
   <body>
     <section id="abstract">
-      <p class="ed-note">The wording of this section is under review.</p>
       <p>
         W3C's <cite>Code of Conduct</cite> defines
         expected and unacceptable behaviors and promotes high standards of
@@ -56,13 +55,13 @@
       <ul>
         <li>Ensure that everyone who participates is treated equitably and with respect.
         </li>
-        <li>Define acceptable and expected standards of behavior.
+        <li>Define a standard of acceptable behavior for the organization.
         </li>
-        <li>Provide a benchmark.
+        <li>Contribute to the identity of the organization.
         </li>
-        <li>Ensure transparency in community and group management.
+        <li>Identify unacceptable behaviors.
         </li>
-        <li>Contribute to the identity of the organization.
+        <li>Provide guidance to participants on addressing issues.
         </li>
       </ul>
     </section>
