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Early Review of draft-ietf-netconf-over-quic-04
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Early Review of draft-ietf-netconf-over-quic-04
Early Review of draft-ietf-netconf-over-quic-04
review-ietf-netconf-over-quic-04-opsdir-early-liu-2025-07-11-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-netconf-over-quic |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2025-07-02 | |
| Requested | 2025-06-11 | |
| Requested by | Kent Watsen | |
| Authors | Jinyou Dai , Shaohua Yu , Weiqiang Cheng , Marc Blanchet , Per Andersson | |
| I-D last updated | 2025-05-22 (Latest revision 2025-05-22) | |
| Completed reviews |
Tsvart Early review of -04
by Martin Duke
Yangdoctors Early review of -04 by Jürgen Schönwälder Opsdir Early review of -04 by Will (Shucheng) LIU |
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| Comments |
The document is about to enter WGLC. |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Will (Shucheng) LIU |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-ietf-netconf-over-quic by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/J02DckYtkZYjPUHCG7l2R3xQrfQ | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2025-07-11 |
review-ietf-netconf-over-quic-04-opsdir-early-liu-2025-07-11-00
I have reviewed draft-ietf-netconf-over-quic-04 as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. “This document specifies how to use QUIC as a secure transport for exchanging Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF) messages. QUIC provides encryption properties similar to TLS, while eliminating TCP head-of-line blocking issues and also providing more loss detection and congestion control than UDP. NETCONF over QUIC has privacy properties similar to NETCONF over TLS.” My overall view of the document is 'Has Nits' for publication. ** Technical ** - The mapping of single or multiple NETCONF sessions to QUIC connections lacks sufficient clarity in the current text. It is recommended that Sections 3 and 4 be revised to elaborate on this point, thereby preventing potential ambiguities. - Given that the document aims to propose QUIC as a secure transport protocol, the Security Considerations section, particularly in relation to NETCONF over TLS, warrants more detailed exposition. - Additionally, it is observed that the inclusion of a YANG Module in the document is not mentioned in the Abstract or Introduction. It is advisable to emphasize this relevant information early in the draft. - Further, details regarding the current implementation status and the tangible advantages over TCP would be valuable additions, and it is suggested that such content be incorporated into the draft. ** Editorial ** No.