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editorial: de-dupe a clause, shorten to principles-based, puncts by tantek · Pull Request #184 · w3c/AB-public · GitHub
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* de-dupe "empower an equitable, informed, and interconnected society", preferring actual citation/quotation to EWP rather than copy/pasting their work * summarize with "principles-based" in-place, thus explicitly centering our principles in our technical work, and thus connecting that to expanding up on "principles" both later in this section and the next section * serial comma update per original in EWP
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I still think this is less impactful without connecting the "why" in the initial line, but I'm going to go with being overruled. |
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I can see arguments in both directions, and would like to hear from others to decide between this PR and #182 |
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As this is editorial, I don't think it needs wider committee review before landing. If someone comes up with something that's being lost or an opportunity to add something meaningful, we can iterate accordingly.
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This PR resolves part of #167
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